regfinch
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docklands buildings
zuiko 85mm on canon 100d.
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29/Dec/15, 5:25 pm
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Steve 734
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Re: docklands buildings
Top of Greenwich Park. I know it well.
I'm looking at it on my laptop so not the best way to view I know but it appears it could take a little brightness increase? Perhaps a little dodging on the Queens House as it has recorded a bit too grey.
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29/Dec/15, 8:45 pm
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eternumviti
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Re: docklands buildings
As Steve says, a bit flat, needs the whites lifting.
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30/Dec/15, 8:46 am
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regfinch
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Re: docklands buildings
i've lightened the front building a bit (queen's house?). i tried it a bit lighter but it stopped my eye going further into the picture - if that makes sense.
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30/Dec/15, 9:40 am
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Steve 734
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Re: docklands buildings
Yep. I think it works a bit better Reg. The difficulty I find shooting from this spot is the way that the building and tree tones render . You needed to lift the front building (it is the Queens House ) to give it a bit of separation from the mid and back grounds.
What you originally posted is a three layered image none of which is clearly defined.Now you've slightly lifted the Queens House it's easier to see and starts to build in a bit of depth.
I'd be tempted to D&B the city buildings to seperate them a tad further from each other and one or two in the midground too.
Don't mean to sound overly critical but I think there's more to be had from this.
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30/Dec/15, 3:17 pm
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Martin P
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Re: docklands buildings
Small tweak but worked nicely giving the image a focal point, without it my eyes just wandered around the image.
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30/Dec/15, 4:26 pm
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regfinch
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Re: docklands buildings
thanks for the comments.
i've fiddled about with it a bit.
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