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Re: A moment in the shade
second pic not showing here Chris
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12/Aug/15, 9:38 pm
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Re: A moment in the shade
Great potential here, the first one looks like an etching but the second has the telephone lines? in,and is a touch contrasty, perhaps a mixture of the two would be worth trying,just my thoughts
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13/Aug/15, 7:11 pm
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Thanks for commenting Tim - if I remember correctly the telephone lines took me ages to remove so I left them in. (Perhaps just getting lazy?)
Not sure if this is what you are referring to but I like the bright ceiling - suggesting/referring to the bright sunlight outside - but contrasting with the person (highlighted against the dark door) but actually standing in full shade.
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13/Aug/15, 7:23 pm
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Chris I can see what you're trying to do but it just doesn't come across quite how you describe to me as effectively as I think you'd like- also I prefer the first crop
Anychnace to post the original to see what that's like?
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Re: A moment in the shade
I think Chris that I prefer the second version. Might be interesting to see that original though.
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14/Aug/15, 6:07 pm
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Re: A moment in the shade
When I'm back on the lap top I will post it Tom
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Re: A moment in the shade
Here you go .....
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Re: A moment in the shade
Chris, I had a little look and here is my version, that's if you don't mind me doing so. I think you captured a great image in the first instance.
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Thanks Tom.
No problem - I prefer your version. Good tones, much better than I managed.
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