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Another variation on the bridge in Valencia.

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Another well composed image Chris although I'm not to sure on the severity of the crop at the top. My personal view is that there should be either more space or no space- it kinda feels too restricted if that makes sense?

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I fail to see the purpose of having about 50% of the image as empty, white space what does this represent?

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I think this is a case of ...'this is what I saw' ...a large expanse of white, bow-shaped painted metal reaching up to the sky, with white strands coming out out of it


And this is what i sought to capture.

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Well Chris, you certainly caught it, I'll say no more, what do I know?

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Thanks for your comments Steve

Not sure I get your drift but of your two suggestions increasing he sky is more likely to work for me so I will give that a go.

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